Elizabeth.Russell Posted June 27, 2013 Report Share Posted June 27, 2013 How did the Second Great Awakening lead to change in asylums? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadMouse Posted June 27, 2013 Report Share Posted June 27, 2013 This is for History I'm guessing? I'm not doing my EE on History, or have it as a subject even. But to me, that topic looks slight broad. Try giving it a time period e.g "... in asylums during the 1840s". Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingprawn Posted June 27, 2013 Report Share Posted June 27, 2013 (edited) There are loads of EE examplars over at ibpal.com, If you want to see some examples of EE topics i would suggest you take a look there for some inspirationThis one got 33/36best of luck! Edited July 7, 2013 by kingprawn 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth.Russell Posted June 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2013 Yes it is history.Thank you. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
sameera95 Posted June 27, 2013 Report Share Posted June 27, 2013 I don't do history myself, but it sounds a little bit broad. here's a website that has 2 example history extended essays that are from the "50 excellent extended essays" collection they don't have the marks they achieved, but its presumably an A since they're deemed excellent http://www.nclack.k12.or.us/Page/4722 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth.Russell Posted June 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2013 How did the Second Great Awakening led to the change in the American asylums in the Victorian Era? 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ak18 Posted July 1, 2013 Report Share Posted July 1, 2013 Yeah this revised question looks better; it has a definite focus now. Even though you said VIctorian Era put the time span in brackets next to it (1837-1901). My teacher advised me to put the time span for my EE in history just to be on the safe side. 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
cjy Posted July 1, 2013 Report Share Posted July 1, 2013 instead of using that as a RQ how about:How & why did the Second Great Awakening led to the change in the American mental asylums in the period 1837-1901?This tightens up the RQ a bit more 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elizabeth.Russell Posted July 6, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2013 So much better than mine. Thank you guys! Y'all are life savors. Cheers to all Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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