hanz Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 i finished my WL essay's first draft and its ''what is the significance of sound imagery and tone in Metamorphosis(kafka) and the stranger(camus). and my topic was sound imgaery tone and mood. but my teacher told me to erase mood and only focus on tone and sound imagery. i only now have about tone and sound imagery and erased other things about mood and now my word count is below 1200 ! !! !!! =[ i dont know what to add more! i talked about sounds the tone and everything in the two books ! i dont know what to add more !! Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mahuta ♥ Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Hello, I dont think i can help because I'm A2. But, could you please do us a favor and not have such titles with capital letters? It wont really make a difference if someone wants to help, they will, if they dont want, then even if you put whole post of begging, they wont help. Thanks in advance. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hanz Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 [quote name='*~*MaHuTa*~*' post='39782' date='Mar 9 2009, 10:56 PM']Hello, I dont think i can help because I'm A2. But, could you please do us a favor and not have such titles with capital letters? It wont really make a difference if someone wants to help, they will, if they dont want, then even if you put whole post of begging, they wont help. Thanks in advance.[/quote] thank you =] Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
LinuxBeta Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 It's a little difficult to tell you what you could add without seeing the essay. Make sure all ideas are flushed out, and is well supported. You can also always bulk up your conclusion with links to the implication of the subject, or what you learned from it...if it applies at all. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tilia Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 [quote name='hanz' post='39779' date='Mar 9 2009, 07:51 PM']i finished my WL essay's first draft and its ''what is the significance of sound imagery and tone in Metamorphosis(kafka) and the stranger(camus). and my topic was sound imgaery tone and mood. but my teacher told me to erase mood and only focus on tone and sound imagery. i only now have about tone and sound imagery and erased other things about mood and now my word count is below 1200 ! !! !!! =[ i dont know what to add more! i talked about sounds the tone and everything in the two books ! i dont know what to add more !! [/quote] Isn't the prescribed word limit 1000-1500 words? Then you'll be fine Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
deissi Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 1200 words is fine. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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