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IA rough drafts are due within the next few days, so, being the procrastinator I am, I just started my rough draft this past week. This is my first time writing an IA and my first time writing a math Paper. My paper is over the probabilities of different autoimmune diseases and evaluating a possible connection between autoimmune diseases (if you have 1, are you more likely to have another?). I am in severe need of assistance, so here is my intro:

"While considering my own interests and experiences I realized the probabilities of my own life and conditions. I have an number of autoimmune diseases: type 1 diabetes, Celiac Disease, and Hashimoto's Thyroiditis. There is no one I have met who has these three diseases, as I do, so I began to wonder what the probability of possessing them is and if, perhaps, having one autoimmune disease makes an individual more susceptible to another."

Any advice is appreciated!

Thank you in advance! :lol:

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