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Having trouble with my essay


Jen-A0509

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The question is good - but perhaps needs a little work.
Firstly, dates.
To what extent did Peter the Great modernize Russia between 1800 - 1801 as a result of the internal rebellion
Secondly, 'internal rebellion' is maybe not the best phrase. Yes, that is what occurred, but what about something like 'internal opposition/internal revolt/popular uprising?'
Thirdly, you may have to quantify 'modernize':
Do you take it to mean:
Reform?
Liberate?
Industrialize?
Modernize in comparison to what/whom? - Britain, France?
I know this seems like a lot, but you want a good interanal assessment mark.

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My suggestion for your question would be "To what extent was the industrialization of Russia under Peter the Great a consequence of the revolution of 1800-1801?" Although I'm not familiar with the topic, it seems like you have a good question to work with. It just needs a bit of rephrasing to make it work.

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