Ryoika Posted March 3, 2014 Report Share Posted March 3, 2014 (edited) .... Edited May 24, 2014 by Ryoika Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted March 4, 2014 Report Share Posted March 4, 2014 Your current KI is fine as it is. I think your resolution for natural sciences is a bit lame though, in a sense that it comes across as something that doesn't require much thought; it doesn't show personal insight. And on that note, I've seen a number of essays that say the same thing. But don't worry, since I did not read your entire essay, maybe you put the point across in an interesting and exploratory manner.What is your current conclusion? Why do you feel the need to change your conclusion? Your conclusion should just follow the points that you have made so far. If your current conclusion is a natural ending to your essay, then just keep it. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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