zeutkfuk Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 I am really in trouble. I got 4 feedback from my teacher and he says I still cant get D! I need help please. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 What exactly is your taecher's comment?You can throw it up to luck as well. It sometimes happens that a teacher predicts a C and the student gets A. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeutkfuk Posted February 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 he says my examples are not got but I think they are good enough. he wants a real academic essay. he didnot like any of my introduction part. I feel like I can get D at least but he says it is impossible. I dont know what do to. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
twilight Posted February 17, 2014 Report Share Posted February 17, 2014 If you think your examples are good enough, then they're good enough. You don't always have to listen to your teacher, which is what my teacher used to say to us. You are responsible for your own work.Some points to consider if your examples are good enough are:1. Are they trite and cliched? (ie no heliocentric and examples that everyone knows)2. Are they specific enough? General examples are not good.3. Do you have a variety of examples? (like say you're talking about sense and perception and you give microscope, telescope, binoculars, all of which are the same type is also not good)4. Do you have many examples? It's not good if your entire essay only has 2 examples. If you're out of words, 1 tip is to use glancing reference, like you can say for example, x, y and z all prove this point but you'll elaborate on x.5. Are your examples relevant to the topic?6. Are your examples real life examples? No hypothetical examples.7. Is there any huge flaw with you choosing that example? Choosing an example which is highly flawed just so you have a counterclaim is a big no.As for introduction, to each their own I suppose. In my intro, I only defined the key terms and then talked about the central idea of my essay, so that examiners know what to expect. 2 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
zeutkfuk Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 this time I am sure that ı am on the right track. I hope there wont be any problem because its really enough to rewrite. thanks! Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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