NiCKEL Posted January 3, 2016 Report Share Posted January 3, 2016 In my intro I seem to be writing rather informal..I don't know if this needs revising: ...detrimental to the reflexes? After all, it would be very difficult to imagine someone listening to a heavy metal band as they are trying to (insert very intricate activity) (the rest of it will be formal for sure; it's just the intro since I'm explaining why I chose those topic, etc) Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oscarthecat3 Posted January 4, 2016 Report Share Posted January 4, 2016 Hi there! I would attempt to have a formal Introduction as well as IA, If your intro is too informal, you may end up passing on a negative impression and potentially you could be penalised. Hope this helps! Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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