My UCAS Personal Statement for Law - got me an interview + offer from Cambridge (Queens' College) and offers from LSE & UCL. Fair warning though - it is not exactly compelling, but hopefully it can be useful reading!
I applied to Durham, Edinburgh, St Andrews, Glasgow and Manchester. I received offers from Edinburgh, St Andrews, Glasgow and following interview, Manchester. I was rejected from Durham. NB Glasgow was for History as they do not read PS.